Writing / Digging Deeper

In room 6 we made posters about digging deeper. 

My first sentence was "My favourite ice-cream flavour is Neapolitan. Good Sentence.

My second sentence was "My favourite ice-cream flavour is yummy Neapolitan. Yum. Great sentence.

My last sentence was "My favourite ice-cream flavour is yummy Neapolitan. It has chocolate,strawberry and vanilla ice-cream in it. Yum. Great sentence.